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cat1999Jul 11, 2012

Hi! i already submit my new story !!! i have it done since 2 weeks ago but today it was the only day i learn how to publish it , hope you can read it its called i wil always remember you... enjoy and tell me what you think about it c:

keishafellerJul 10, 2012

Hey, wassup! Hope things are well with you! I am keeping up with mental Love, congrats on the nice twists! Just letting you know I have posted a new chapter of the Bridesmaids. The story is soon coming to an end. Hope you like it!

cat1999Jul 9, 2012

hahahah thank you $\:D$ i�ll try to post it c: hope you can read it!!

cat1999Jul 7, 2012

hi!! thank you for answering my comments you inspire me to write a story xd but i am sure they will never be as great as yours c; keep on writing

fabrizioammolloJul 5, 2012

Hi Lyenne! You are very welcome. F.

spitzmagicJul 4, 2012

Hi Lyennerd $\:D$ thank so much for commenting on my Lucky Palms screen. Wishing you a great week $\;\)$

keishafellerJun 25, 2012

You're welcome, Lyenne! Have a great day!

wasabichiJun 25, 2012

hi lyenne! thanks for leaving a sweet feedback on the epilogue of masterxmaid. Have a gorgeous day ahead! $\;\)$

keishafellerJun 12, 2012

Hello Lyenne! How are you? Just wanted to inform you that have posted Chapter 6 of my Story " The Bridesmaids"!

keishafellerJun 7, 2012

You're most welcome, Lyenne! I know it would have been easier if you were originally from an english speaking country, but you still can try, doesn't hurt! And if you are uncertain about a word, you can translate it word for word at microsofttranslator.com. Hope it works!

keishafellerJun 6, 2012

Hello Lyenne! I hope you saw my comments on your stories, The Mental Love chapters 2 and 3. Impressive! Just one piece of advice though: when you speak about Trevor ( or when Trevor speaks), try to develop a little more each time on his feelings ( as the narrator), leaking a little more information about him, to entice the readers. And I also felt like the Dr didn't spend enough time with them ( I know you dont want to lengthen the sessions for the purpose of story writing, but there are some words that you can actually use to make it look like the Dr is spending enough time with each of them: |After half an hour.. a long hour had passed but Trevor still hadn't opened up.. etc. Remember you want it as close to the reality as possible, and Drs are known to be patients and understanding, especially when dealing with teens! Sorry for this unusually long msg on ur guestbook, but I just giving you my feedback because I appreciate your stories and efforts, and you usually do the same for me!